Assignment Content
- In class, we learned how to write the introduction and conclusion of the Literature Review section, which includes:
Introduction (6 sentences on p. 10a)
Review of Literature (using notes on p. 13a – ONE objective summary is graded already — apply feedback)
Analysis of Literature (compare and contrast activity on p. 16a)
For this submission: You will submit your full draft of the Literature Review in a WORD document.
YOU MUST CHECK YOUR SIMILARITY prior to submission here.
Grading:
Title Page = 10 pts
Literature Review: Intro, Review of Literature, and Analysis of Literature WITH in-text citations and correct level headings:
Introduction = 15 pts
Review of Literature = 40 pts
Analysis of Literature = 20 pts
References page with ALL three research articles listed = 15 pts
Final ‘Mission’ Packet
[Your Name]
Department of [Your Major], King Graduate School
KG 60
4
: Graduate Research & Critical Analysis
Professor Ramlochan
April
2
0
23
Required Task
Week Skill is Practiced
Workbook Activity
Page Number
APA-7-Compliant Title Page
Week 3
Level 1 Header:
Title of Your Paper
5
· Introduction paragraph with a thesis statement
Week 12
Activity: 1st Sentence of the Opening Paragraph
6a
Activity: Drafting Your Thesis Statement
7a
Level 1 Header:
Literature Review
8
· Opening paragraph ensuring credibility of sources evaluated in the Review of Literature
Week 7
9
Activity: Developing Introductory Paragraph to Literature Review
10a
· Review of Literature including only research articles
Week 6
11
Activity: Notes for Research Articles, Notice My Capitalization
13a
· Analysis of Literature including compare and contrast of methodologies, findings, and recommendations
Week 8
16
Activity: Analyze Your Research Articles: Compare and Contrast
16a
Activity: Checklist for the Literature Review
17a
Level 1 Header:
Discussion: Mitigation Recommendation
17b
· Opening paragraph summarizing the populations/locations affected by this problem
Week 10
Activity: Reintroduce and Summarize the Problem and Populations Affected
17b
· Summary of existing mitigation techniques
Week 9
Activity: Find a Company/Organization/Policy Working to Mitigate the Problem
17c
· Recommendation, connecting existing mitigation techniques to the specific location/population of the problem
Week 10
Activity: Develop Your Recommendation with Evidence
18a
Level 1 Header:
Conclusion
21
· Conclusion paragraph
Activity: Checklist to the Conclusion Paragraph:
22a
New Page – Level 1 Header:
References
APA-7-Compliant References Page including every source cited in-text
Week 3
Instructions to Packet Use
Activities must be completed according to the weekly order on p.
2.
The process and order of conducting secondary applied research taught in KG 604 will provide you with a strong framework of research, which you will continue to build upon and adjust throughout your program. Do not complete Actives in any other order than the weekly order on p.2.
You will then use all Activities, in the order listed on p. 2, to guide you during the writing process.
Page #
Paper Title (bold with title capitalization)
Racial Disparities in Healthcare Among Pregnant Women in the United States
(NOTICE one blank, double-spaced line)
Katniss Everdeen
Department of Public Health, King Graduate School
Due Date
Your Name
Department & Name of College
Course Number & Name
KG 604: Research & Critical Analysis
Instructor’s Name
(first name optional)
Dr. John H. Watson
July 1, 2021
Introductory Paragraph
Outline for Introductory Paragraph
·
Opening Sentence: Grab the reader’s attention.
·
Transition Sentence(s): Each sentence should naturally flow from the opening sentence into the thesis statement.
·
Thesis Statement: One sentence to summarize what is addressed in the paper with your recommendation: It is your whole paper “squished” into one sentence!
Transition Sentences
Opening Sentence
Thesis Statement
Color Coding:
Green = Opening sentence meant to grab reader’s attention
= Sentences in between that are needed to transition from Green to Purple
Purple = Thesis statement
Student Sample: Introduction
Introduction
African American, American Indian, and Alaska Native women are up to three times
more likely to die from adverse pregnancy-related outcomes, a disparity that increases with
age (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 2019).
Researchers found a program which provided support to African American women through group trainings entailing stress reduction techniques, life skills development, and the building of social support. This enabled mitigation efforts to be focused and geared around the factors that influence and contributed to adverse pregnancy outcomes among the minority women within the community, thus reducing and preventing negative pregnanchy outcomes in women of color. In the United States, maternal mortality and adverse health outcomes persist within the minority community, and as a result, racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women is a current preventable public health concern, therefore it is vital to understand the determinants of health that influences negative pregnancy related outcomes in minority women, similar to one of California’s intervention programs, the Black Infant Health Program (Nichols & Cohen, 2019).
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Opening Sentence
6a
Activity: 1st Sentence of the Opening Paragraph
Purpose: To Grab the Reader’s Attention
This ONE Sentence Must include:
1. a surprising, disturbing, little-known, or wonderful fact
2. a statistic
3. an in-text citation
Examples: Find and Number All Three of These Elements Below
Student Samples: Opening Sentence
Sample 1
African American, American Indian, and Alaska Native women are up to three times
more likely to die from adverse pregnancy-related outcomes, a disparity that increases with
age (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 2019).
Sample 2
Studies estimate that approximately 40 million Americans, or about 20 percent of the population, are attempting to restrict their intake of food high in carbohydrates (Sanders and Katz, 2004; Hirsch, 2004).
Write your own here, and number the 3 parts!
1st sample adapted from student paper, Tamifer Lewis;
2nd sample adapted from on-line textbook, retrieved from http://saylor.org/books.455
Thesis Statement
Your thesis statement is the driving force of your paper based on research. It should feel like it is your entire paper in one sentence: the problem, the research, recommendation based on research.
General Formula
Problem + research + recommendation based on the research (citation) = your thesis statement
***Important***
Certain things can change in the general formula based on what your professor asks. This is why it is so important to read directions very carefully.
KG 604: Steps to the Thesis
1. Restate the Problem with citation
2. Isolate and name the company/organization/program/policy and state why it works, with citation
3. Connect #2 to your population or location and write your
recommendation
Student Sample Thesis Statement
Research examples to illustrate the points above.
In the United States, maternal mortality and adverse health outcomes persist within the minority community, yet as racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women is a current preventable public health concern, it is vital to understand the determinants of health that influences negative pregnancy related outcomes in minority women, similar to one of California’s intervention programs, the Black Infant Health Program (Nichols and Cohen, 2019).
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Activity: Drafting Your Thesis Statement
7a
Answer the following questions in the orange column below and place a check mark next to each task.
Steps
Description of Steps
Draft Your Notes to Build Your Thesis Statement
Check
1
· Restate the Problem with citation:
2
· Isolate and name the company/organization/ program/policy and state why it works, with citation:
3
· Connect #2 to your population or location and write your recommendation
Steps
Ensure the Following:
Check
4
·
My thesis statement is the Last Sentence of the Opening Paragraph
5
·
My recommendation is based ONLY on the Research, with no
6
·
My thesis statement contains in-text citations
Now, use your work above to write your statement in the blank space below!
Literature Review
Definition (part of the overall research paper you will write for this course)
A
literature review
is an objective summary of what the scientific literature says about
your specific topic or question. In this kind of paper, you demonstrate your familiarity with pertinent work in the field. The literature review gives the research history, upon which later research can be built.
The Literature Review is Not a Research Paper
Research Paper (what you may be writing in other courses;
includes a literature review) The goal of a
research paper
is to draw on what others have to say about a topic and
engage the sources in order to thoughtfully offer a unique perspective on the issue at hand.
Typically includes these sections (may vary per your professor’s assignment):
1. Introduction
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
Adapted from:
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/apa_style/apa_formatting_and_style_guide/types_of_ap
a_papers.html
and
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/common_writing_assignments/research_papers/genre_and_th
e_research_paper.html
Three Parts of the Literature Review
1.
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review: 6 Steps
Six Steps to a Successful Introduction
Steps
Description of Steps
Sample
1
Opening sentence: isolate your research problem, with citation
“Research suggests that racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women persists in the United States (Zhang et al. 2013).”
2
Explain why it is necessary to solve this problem
“Due to this continuous occurrence, it is vital to examine the factors that contribute to the adverse outcomes in maternal health.”
3
Ensure your reader that you have only included research articles in the literature review and identify the main theme among them
“The literature review
contained only research articles about factors that impacted and influenced disparities in
pregnancy outcomes.”
4
If you notice multiple factors, you should list them
“Factors that were reviewed were socioeconomic status, public health insurance, race/ethnicity, and poverty status.”
5
Include the names of the databases you used to conduct your research from the Monroe College Library
“The literature review was conducted using EBSCO
Host and ProQuest databases from the Monroe College Library.”
6
Lastly, list any search words/terms you used in order to find your research articles
“The search terms used to
compile pertinent articles were racial disparities maternal health, adverse pregnancy outcomes,
and maternal health outcomes
.”
Student Sample: Introduction to Literature Review
gg
Literature Review
Research suggests that racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women persists in
the United States (Zhang et al. 2013). Due to this continuous occurrence, it is vital to examine
the factors that contribute to the adverse outcomes in maternal health. The literature review
contained only research articles about factors that impacted and influenced disparities in
pregnancy outcomes. Factors that were reviewed were socioeconomic status, public health
insurance, race/ethnicity, and poverty status. The literature review was conducted using EBSCO
Host and ProQuest databases from the Monroe College Library. The search terms used to
compile pertinent articles were racial disparities maternal health, adverse pregnancy outcomes,
and maternal health outcomes
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Activity: Developing Introductory Paragraph to Literature Review
10a
Directions
Fill in the orange column to build out your introductory paragraph.
Steps
Description of Steps
Your Sentences
Check
1
Opening sentence: isolate your research problem, with citation
2
Explain why it is necessary to solve this problem
3
Ensure your reader that you have only included research articles in the literature review and identify the main theme among them
4
If you notice multiple factors, you should list them
5
Include the names of the databases you used to conduct your research from the Monroe College Library
6
Lastly, list any search words/terms you used in order to find your research articles
2.
3.
Review of Literature
This part consists of the objective summaries of your research articles. The order in which you present these is important. You will need to create Level 2-3 headings to cluster similar research articles by theme or purpose. (Typically, each level heading should include at least three research articles, amounting to 5-10 research articles,
but as this is a foundations course, you will only provide a total of three to four (3-4) research articles for your Literature Review.)
For each research article found on your topic, you must write a strong objective summary, academic paragraph, that includes all aspects below (W[5] H[1]). The answer to each of these questions below will help you keep track of notes that will eventually be used to write each academic paragraph.
Six Questions to Answer to Summarize a Research Article:5 “W” Questions and 1 “H” Question
1.
Who: Who conducted the study? (name of the author*)
*If more than two authors, the name you use must be the first (primary) author listed, who is responsible for ensuring the quality of others’ contributions followed by et al.
2.
When: In what year was the study conducted? (usually not the publication year)
3.
Where: In which city, state, or country was the study conducted?
4.
Why: Why was the study conducted – what did the researcher(s) hope to learn?
5.
How: How was the study conducted? —D
etailed description
including
methodology (
qualitative, quantitative, mixed-method, literature review, or meta-study), participants etc.
2
6.
What: What did the researcher(s)
find? — Give the results of the study with specificity, so we understand the value of the study, and how it relates to the WHY
Writing an Objective Summary
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What to Do: Write A Short Version of the Article Focus on the 6 Important Questions:
Anyone reading the summary below knows
who
the main author is (last name of the first
author listed if there are more than one);
why
,
when
,
where,
and
how
the study was conducted;
and
what
the researcher(s) found
(5 “W” questions and 1 “H” question).
Good Example of an Objective Summary
Activity: Practice with Objective Summaries
Please Find the Answers to All Six Questions Below and Underline or Highlight Them!
Student Sample: Objective Summary
Darling et al. (2021) conducted a study between 2001 and 2018 to examine the efficiency of qualified interventions in preterm birth, small for gestational age, low birth weight, neonatal death, cesarean deliveries, maternal care satisfaction, and coast effectiveness programs. A systematic review was used to collect data from the United States, France, Spain, and the Netherlands. The studies consisted of mostly non- Caucasian women from low-income population ranging from 12 to 46 years of age and being between 20 to 32 weeks’ gestation. Interventional programs were implemented into three categories: group prenatal care, augmented prenatal care, or a combination of both group and augmented prenatal care (Darling et al. 2021). The researchers found that certain interventions, such as prenatal care and augmented care, or a combination of both, may decrease adverse outcomes in small-for-gestational-age and preterm birth, and could aid in increasing maternal care satisfaction. Interventions that worked on enhancing coordination of care were found to result in providing more effective cost savings. The researchers also found disparities in the quality of access to care in the vulnerable population. There was insufficient evidence of suitable quality to confirm that the interventions were successful at enhancing clinical outcomes in prenatal care for at risk populations (Darling et al. 2021).
Writing an Objective Summary: What Not to Do
What NOT to Do: Write ABOUT the Article
The example below gives us information on what the article was about, but we are left in
the dark about
how the author conducted the study, and
what she found.
Bad Example
In the study, Chiara Dall’Ora et al. (2015), explained the connection between shift length and burnout among nurses in European countries. In the article, they tell why they conducted the research, how they conducted the research, and also gives the results of the research, providing statistics of the findings (Dall’Ora et al., 2015).
(Can you even find the W5 H1?)
What NOT to Do: Write
CONCLUSIONS/OPINIONS About the Article
The example below gives us information about what the reader’s
conclusions or
opinions
are.
BAD Example
In the study, Chiara Dall’Ora et al. (2015), explained the connection between shift length and burnout among nurses in European countries. This is an important issue because we have to make sure nurses are not burnt out so they can care for patients properly. In the article, they tell why they conducted the research, how they conducted the research, and they also give the results of the research, providing statistics of the findings. If more hospital administrators cared about the well-being of nurses and implemented change, we would have a better healthcare system (Dall’Ora et al., 2015
(Again, can you find the W5 H1?)
Rubric for Objective Summary
Please check off where your assignment is on each criterion in this rubric and submit it with your assignment
Criteria
Excellent
Not yet excellent
Not yet satisfactory
Free of opinion
Summary is free of opinion
Summary has one opinion word
Summary has more than one opinion word
Using own words
Summary is entirely in the student’s own words
A short phrase appears not to be in student’s own words
Piece has elements of plagiarism (some parts appear to be copied from the article being summarized)
Effectiveness of summary
Summary provides ALL 6 important points:
Who conducted the research (primary author)
Why?
Where?
When?
How?
What were the findings?
1 of the 6 questions is unanswered or is insufficiently answered
2 or more of the 6 questions are unanswered or are insufficiently answered
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Activity: Notes for Research Articles, Notice My Capitalization
Complete this note sheet in two phases (based on ALL research articles found).
Phase 1: First answer questions 5 and 6 for each article below. IF you cannot find the answers to questions 5 and 6, that means your article is NOT a research article, so you must find a new one.
Phase 2: Once you have determined EACH article is a research article, AND your professor has approved them, you may complete questions 1-4 for each.
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #1 (Basic Research Article)
1.
Who conducted the research?
2.
Why was the study completed (purpose / what researchers hoped to learn)
?
3.
When was data collected (not the publication year)
?
4.
Where was data collected (physical location)
?
(
examples:
in hospitals in NY State,
in rural China,
in 3 countries in Africa: Burkina Faso, Cameroon, and Djibouti)
5.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
6.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #2 (Basic Research Article)
1.
Who conducted the research?
2.
Why was the study completed (purpose / what researchers hoped to learn)
?
3.
When was data collected (not the publication year)
?
4.
Where was data collected (physical location)
?
(
examples:
in hospitals in NY State,
in rural China,
in 3 countries in Africa: Burkina Faso, Cameroon, and Djibouti)
5.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
6.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #3 (Basic OR Applied Research Article)
1.
Who conducted the research?
2.
Why was the study completed (purpose / what researchers hoped to learn)
?
3.
When was data collected (not the publication year)
?
4.
Where was data collected (physical location)
?
(
examples:
in hospitals in NY State,
in rural China,
in 3 countries in Africa: Burkina Faso, Cameroon, and Djibouti)
5.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
6.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #4 (Applied Research Article)
1.
Who conducted the research?
2.
Why was the study completed (purpose / what researchers hoped to learn)
?
3.
When was data collected (not the publication year)
?
4.
Where was data collected (physical location)
?
(
examples:
in hospitals in NY State,
in rural China,
in 3 countries in Africa: Burkina Faso, Cameroon, and Djibouti)
5.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
6.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
Now that you have found all the parts to your research ‘scavenger hunt’, you need to consider what order you will present these in. Complete the next Activity to help you determine a logical order to present research. This Activity will be needed later, as well. Only after completing the Activity can you write your Review of Literature.
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Student Sample: Review of Literature
Review of Literature
Adverse Pregnancy Outcome Factors
Darling et al. (2021) conducted a study between 2001 and 2018 to examine the efficiency of qualified interventions in preterm birth, small for gestational age, low birth weight, neonatal death, cesarean deliveries, maternal care satisfaction, and coast effectiveness programs. A systematic review was used to collect data from the United States, France, Spain, and the Netherlands. The studies consisted of mostly non- Caucasian women from low-income population ranging from 12 to 46 years of age and being between 20 to 32 weeks’ gestation. Interventional programs were implemented into three categories: group prenatal care, augmented prenatal care, or a combination of both group and augmented prenatal care (Darling et al. 2021). The researchers found that certain interventions, such as prenatal care and augmented care, or a combination of both, may decrease adverse outcomes in small-for-gestational-age and preterm birth, and could aid in increasing maternal care satisfaction. Interventions that worked on enhancing coordination of care were found to result in providing more effective cost savings. The researchers also found disparities in the quality of access to care in the vulnerable population. There was insufficient evidence of suitable quality to confirm that the interventions were successful at enhancing clinical outcomes in prenatal care for at risk populations (Darling et al. 2021).
Similar observations were made in a study conducted by Nichols and Cohen (2020), between 2006 and 2018 to examine the methods used to improve the results of maternal mortality in California. The study was conducted using a scoping review to evaluate research on women and maternal health in the United States. The researchers used information from the US Maternal Fetal Medicine Network to measure the percentage of studies where pregnant women, women, and children were the main focus. The researchers also reviewed documentation on healthcare policies and practices from California’s public health department, healthcare foundation, and Maternal Quality Care Collaborative. Nichols and Cohen (2020) found that although the health of fetus and children could be adversely affected by the health of the mother, the majority of maternal programs in the United States places emphasis on the child. The researchers also found four areas of concern in women health experiences, both in pre and postnatal care. The problem areas entailed inadequate investment in women’s health, inefficient quality of care and avoidable caesarean delivers, expanding disparities in minority women and women living in rural areas, and contradictory collection and distribution of data (Nichols & Cohen, 2020).
Approaches to Improving Pregnancy Outcomes
In contrast to the preceding studies, Zhang et al. (2013) conducted a study between 2005 and 2007 to calculate the excessive rate of unfavorable outcomes in pregnancy within racial and ethnic groups. The study also aimed to measure the possibility of Medicaid savings that are linked to paid maternal care claims resulting from the inequalities that contribute to unfavorable maternal outcomes. A cross-sectional study using Medicaid Analytic eXtract (MAX) data was used to gather pregnancy outcome information from inpatient hospitals from 14 states (Florida, Alabama, Arkansas, North Carolina, Georgia, Louisiana, Kentucky, Mississippi, Maryland, Missouri, Tennessee, South Carolina, Virginia, and Texas). The study consisted of a little over 2 million patients who were insured with Medicaid and had a delivery code of maternal delivery stay. Zhang et al. (2013) found that, with the exception of gestational diabetes, African American women showed the worst outcomes out of all unfavorable pregnancy outcomes. These disparities are postulated as being multi-factorial, having causes stemming from complicated experiences with racism, poverty, and complex healthcare interactions. It was also found that women covered under Medicaid health insurance were more likely to have consistency in care from prenatal care through delivery compared to their counterparts. However, due to participation in Medicaid programs being influenced by reimbursement rates, some providers may choose to stop accepting Medicaid patients because of reimbursement delays and low payment rates, which could contribute to negative birth outcomes (Zhang et al., 2013).
3.
Analysis of Literature
In that last paragraph, you will analyze what you have learned about your research problem through the research summarized in the Review of Literature. Different courses may ask you to consider varying but specific things during your analysis. In KG 604, you will present what is the same among your 3-4 research articles and what is different among methodologies, findings, and recommendations. After completing the Activity on the next pager, decide on the order in which you will present research articles and write your Review of Literature.
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Activity: Analyze Your Research Articles: Compare and Contrast
Directions
Use Activity: Notes for Research Articles, Notice My Capitalization (on the pages between 13 and 14) to help you analyze below what is the same among your 3 research articles and what is different.
You must use language like the words listed below:
Sample comparison words
Sample contrast words
…similar to… …different from…
…like… …however…
…also… …on the other hand…
Example for You
If asked to write a complete sentence, comparing similarities among my research articles, I might come up with something like below. The example below only features two research articles. Be sure to include all of yours.
1.
What articles have similarities in each section below?
a.
Methodology
Dall’Ora et al. (2015) and Stimpfel et al. (2012) both used qualitative methods with large sample sizes; 31,627 (Dall’Ora et al., 2015) and 22,275 (Stimpfel et al., 2012)
b.
Findings
Both studies (Dall’Ora et al., 2015; Stimpfel et al., 2012) found a strong association between longer shifts and job dissatisfaction and the negative effects on patient satisfaction.
c.
Recommendations
Both studies (Dall’Ora et al., 2015; Stimpfel et al., 2012) suggest policy makers to use the findings to reconsider their current approach of increasing hours due to nurse shortage because of the long-term negative effects on nurses and patients.
1.
What articles have similarities in each section below?
a.
Methodology
b.
Findings
c.
Recommendations
2.
What articles have differences in each section below?
a.
Methodology
b.
Findings
c.
Recommendations
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Student Sample: Analysis of Literature
Analysis of Literature
In the United States, the persistence of maternal mortality continues to be a problem area in public health. The contributing factors that impact pregnancy outcomes persist in burdening the U.S., leading to poor healthcare quality, and increasing health disparities. The studies used in this literature review each used a different form of research methodology to collect data, including systematic and scoping reviews and cross-sectional studies. Similarly, Darling et al. (2021), Nichols and Cohen (2020), and Zhang et al. (2013) have emphasized the correlation between race/ethnicity and financial status playing a part in influencing quality of care, access of care, and pregnancy outcomes in pregnant minority women. To mitigate the disparities in maternal health Darling et al. (2021) and Zhang et al. (2013) suggested that interventions should be inspected and geared towards determining and eradicating the racial and ethnic disparities that affect pregnancy-related outcomes. Whereas Nichols and Cohen (2020) suggested focusing on exploring the distinctive experiences of particular at-risk subgroups of women, such as women in prison, who are of childbearing age, and the pregnant women who are less likely to pursue prenatal care, such as undocumented women.
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Activity: Checklist for the Literature Review
(
your professor may want this to be submitted with your literature review)
Part 1: Introductory Paragraph to Literature Review
Steps
Description of Steps
Check
1
Opening sentence: isolate your research problem, with citation
2
Explain why it is necessary to solve this problem
3
Ensure your reader that you have only included research articles in the literature review and identify the main theme among them
4
If you notice multiple factors, you should list them
5
Include the names of the databases you used to conduct your research from the Monroe College Library
6
Lastly, list any search words/terms you used in order to find your research articles
Part 2: Review of Literature
1st paragraph is the objective summary of the first research article with limitations.
2nd paragraph includes a transition word from the first research article to the objective
summary of the second research article with limitations.
3rd paragraph includes a transition word from the first research article to the objective
summary of the second research article with limitations.
Flow
Is organized by findings, geography, methodology, or time
Uses headings to help your readers find their way
Uses transition words like compare/contrast words so the reader sees the flow
from article to article
Sample comparison words
Sample contrast words
…similar to… …different from…
…like… …however…
…also… …on the other hand…
Part 3: Analysis of Literature
Includes similarities and differences of methodologies
Includes similarities and differences of findings
Includes similarities and differences of recommendations
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Discussion: Mitigation Recommendation
17b
Important: the requirements of the Discussion Section may differ from one course to the next. Therefore, it is very important to read directions carefully to understand what your professor is asking.
For KG 604, you will use research conducted throughout the semester that reports on your research problem; you will use this to introduce your discussion. This is important, as it provides ‘proof’ that the problem is relevant today.
Activity: Reintroduce and Summarize the Problem and Populations Affected
(think of this like your formal introduction into the Discussion section)
Complete the Orange Columns.
Steps
Task
Description of Steps
Your Notes
In-Text Citations
1
Summarize:
Whatever your research problem is, you will need to summarize the proof that the
problem exists today by
1. Identify the problem:
2. Identify populations affected:
3. Identify the location:
1.
the problem
2.
populations affected by
providing an ‘example’ of your research problem happening in the world.
the problem
3.
location of the problem, if applicable
For your ‘example’, you will use articles found for KG- 604, but in other courses it
may be a case study from
your textbook, a summary of
the problem provided by your
professors, or you may need
to find a relevant ‘case’ on
your own.
Activity: Find a Company/Organization/Policy Working to Mitigate the Problem
17c
Complete the orange columns in your notebook.
Steps
Task
Description of Steps
Your Notes
In-Text Citations
2
Use p. 18 to find and summarize an existing evidence-based solution to use as a foundation to YOUR
recommendation.
Conduct further research using methods on p. 18 to find a company/organization/ program/policy that is doing a good job trying to mitigate this problem (this could be from another state or even another country where populations are comparable).
1. Name of company/organization/ program/policy:
2. Include detailed evidence that this ‘solution’ is working (do not forget to include dates/years, and statistics as support):
3. Identify specific ‘parts’ of the ‘solution’ that you wish to recommend:
Guidance: Foundation to Your Recommendation
Through Your Existing Sources
1. Go to your news article or any of the research articles used for the Literature Review
2. Do any of the above sources mention a policy, program, law, etc. that has been implemented to help reduce the problem?
3. If yes, go to Google and find that policy, program, law etc. (save it)
4. If no, proceed below.
Through Additional Sources
If your news article or any of your research articles do not tell you about a law, policy, or program etc. that has been implemented to help reduce your research problem, please use the guidance below to help you find a foundation policy, program, law, etc. You will need this for next class.
1. Go to Google
-OR- the Monroe College Library databases associated with your major (see pp. 8-9 in the
Foundations text for databases you should be using)
2. Type in the search bar your research problem + population + chosen search term
Your Research Problem
+ Population +
Search Terms
· Legislation
· Policy
· Law
· Intervention
· Program
· Education
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Activity: Develop Your Recommendation with Evidence
Complete the orange columns in your notebook.
Steps
Task
Description of Steps
Your Notes
In-Text Citations
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Form your recommendation
Use your selected company/organization/ program/policy as a basis for your recommendation.
Connect this recommendation to the research problem.
1. Identify what is the same and different between your research population and the ‘solution’s’ population:
Same:
Different:
2. Explain how you envision the “specific parts of the ‘solution’” helping to mitigate your research problem:
18a
.
Student Sample: Discussion
Discussion
There is current evidence that racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women continues to be a problem in the United States. In an article published by The New York Times, there has been a persistence and growth in racial disparity throughout the years despite calls to take action to improve medical care access for women of color (Rabin, 2019). Similarly, in a study conducted by Nichols and Cohen (2019) mounting disparities continue amid women health outcomes in the United States, primarily among race and ethnicity and within residents living in urban and rural areas (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). These disparities directly affect African American, Alaska Native and Native American Women (Rabin, 2019). When compared to other high-income countries, the United States has substandard records in maternal health outcomes, and while the rate of maternal mortality dropped across the world, America’s maternal health outcomes have worsened (Rabin, 2019).
To reduce the disparities among minority women policy changes have been made. Federal law enacted the Preventing Maternal Death Act providing states with grants to explore, examine and investigate pregnancy related deaths for up to one year after the birth of a child (Rabin, 2019). Also, The American College of Obstetrics and Gynecologists created new guidelines in treating cardiovascular disease in pregnant women (Rabin, 2019). In 2014 Alliance for Innovation on Maternal Health (AIM) was developed by the American College of Obstetrics and Gynecology to collaborate with partners of the states and hospitals to gather information on safety measures being taken to improve maternal health outcomes, allowing partners to assess and track program progress (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). In the study conducted by Nichols and Cohen (2019), two out of the various programs that California implemented were the Black Infant Health Program (BIH) and increasing the states income eligibility for pregnant women to 200% of the federal poverty level. With the implementation of these programs, mortality rates decreased from 22.1% to 8.3% in the best practices toolkit, a program developed for hemorrhage and high blood pressure during pregnancy. Altogether, California’s maternal mortality rate decreased by above 50% between 2006 and 2018 (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). To prevent negative pregnancy outcomes in women of color, California used federal funds to develop programs that focused on African American mothers and the health determinants that are influenced by social and structural factors. The Black Infant Health Program provided support to African American women through group trainings, entailing of stress reduction, life skills development, and building social support (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). Nearly half of the babies born in the United States are insured under Medicaid which covers the child through the first year of life. However, in most states, Medicaid provides coverage for the mother until 60 days postpartum, after which the mother must meet the federal poverty level to be eligible for coverage (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). This exposes the mother to various risks that can adversely affect her health. Expanding Medicaid access would mitigate the maternal healthcare barriers that affect low socioeconomic minority women.
Racial disparities in maternal healthcare are a persistent problem in the United States. African American mothers experience higher adverse pregnancy outcomes and are less likely to obtain sufficient prenatal care when compared to Caucasian women (Zhang et al., 2013). Similarly, racial disparities among women of color are made worse by partialities in the healthcare that they receive (Nichols and Cohen, 2019). To mitigate racial disparities in maternal health among minority women it is important to understand the determinants that contribute to their health outcomes. With increased federal funding, programs can be geared towards providing quality care to women of color. This can be established by utilizing specific methods of care that are relatable to those being serviced in the community, providing them with medical professionals that are culturally competent and adequately trained in servicing underserved communities, fostering a trusting provider-patient relationship. Nichols and Cohen (2019) suggest that funding should be used to address the social factors that influence maternal health to reduce the psychosocial risks in women who may be more vulnerable to adverse pregnancy outcomes. The pregnancy-related risks of a mother do not end after her child’s birth. The expansion of Medicaid access and coverage would provide a mother with the means of receiving adequate care during all stages of pregnancy and during the postpartum period, in which she can still be adversely affected from her pregnancy. It is vital for the federal government to enact policies requiring states to provide medical coverage to women for one year after the birth of their child. Providing coverage to various specialties would ensure the mother has efficient access to care should adverse symptoms develop. Nichols and Cohen (2019) postulated that state programs should expand Medicaid coverage for women focusing on their healthcare needs before, during and after pregnancy, paying close attention to women’s health and chronic disease management, especially to those who have or had high risk pregnancies. Implementing these programs would develop a foundation in the quality of racial maternal care across all states and provide cohesion and uniformity in the delivery of care.
Conclusion Paragraph
For the last paragraph of your research paper, you will simply reiterate and connect main ideas discussed in your paper to your recommendation.
Student Sample: Conclusion
Conclusion
As seen in one of California’s intervention programs, the Black Infant Health Program (Nichols and Cohen, 2019), a program which provided support to African American women through group trainings, which entailed stress reduction techniques, life skills development, and the building of social support enabled mitigation efforts to be focused and geared around the influencing factors that contributed to adverse pregnancy outcomes among the minority women within the community, thus reducing and preventing negative pregnancy outcomes in women of color. African American, American Indian, and Alaska Native women are up to three times more likely to die from adverse pregnancy related outcomes, a disparity that increases with age (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 2019). In the United States, maternal mortality and adverse health outcomes persist within the minority community and as a result racial disparities in healthcare among pregnant women is a current preventable public health concern, therefore it is vital to understand the determinants of health that influences negative pregnancy related outcomes in minority women.
Continue to the checklist on the next page; your professor may require it.
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Activity: Checklist to the Conclusion Paragraph:
22a
· I restated my research problem (Y/N)
· I restated recommendations provided in the literature review (Y/N)
· I have included the name of company/organization/program/policy, which is the basis for my recommendation (Y/N)
· I have explained why I believe the above company/organization/program/policy will work to mitigate the problem shown in my news article (Y/N)
Space for Notes:
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References
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References (bold, centered, & on the first line)
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. (2019, September 6). Racial and ethnic disparities continue in pregnancy-related deaths. https://www.cdc.gov/media/releases/2019/p0905- racial-ethnic-disparities-pregnancy-deaths.html
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1 tab (hanging indent)
Darling, E. K., Cody, K., Meara Tubman-Broeren, & Marquez, O. (2021). The effect of prenatal care delivery models targeting populations with low rates of PNC attendance: A systematic review. Journal of Health Care for the Poor and Underserved, 32(1), 119- 136. https://www.proquest.com/scholarly-journals/effect-prenatal-care-delivery-modelstargeting/docview/2507722229/se-2
Nichols, C. R., & Cohen, A. K. (2021). Preventing maternal mortality in the United States: Lessons from California and policy recommendations. Journal of Public Health Policy, 42(1), 127-144.
https://doi.org/10.1057/s41271-020-00264-9
Rabin, R. C. (2019, May 8). Huge racial disparities persist in pregnancy-related deaths, and are growing. New York Times, A20(L). https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A584694288/ITOF?u=nysl_me_moncol&sid=bookmarkITOF&xid=b9422ff9
Zhang, S., Cardarelli, K., Shim, R., Ye, J., Booker, K. L., & Rust, G. (2013). Racial disparities in economic and clinical outcomes of pregnancy among Medicaid recipients. Maternal and Child Health Journal, 17(8), 1518+. https://link.gale.com/apps/doc/A344827866/PPNU?u=nysl_me_moncol&sid=bookmarkPPNU&xid=51747d5
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Rubric for References Page
Please check off where your assignment is on each criterion in this rubric Complete and submit it with your assignment
Criteria
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Everything, including the page number, is in Times New Roman
12. Page number is in
upper right corner
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References are double-spaced,
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‘Formula’ for Journal Articles:
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Ponzi Schemes in relation to Cryptocurrency
Student’s name
Professor’s name
Course title
Institution
Date
Ponzi Schemes in relation to Cryptocurrency
1.
What articles have similarities in each section below?
a.
Methodology
There was a similarity in the methodology that Galletta & Pinelli (2023) and He et al. (2022) used. Galletta & Pinelli (2023) utilized experimental evaluation to classify different forms of fraud. Likewise, He et al. (2022) performed experiments to explore cryptocurrency fraud.
b.
Findings
Across the board, the studies indicated that fraud in relation to cryptocurrency has been on the rise. The literature review by Trozze et al. (2022) found several classifications of fraud associated with cryptocurrency. Their research showed that Ponzi schemes were the most common form of fraud. Galletta and Pinelli (2023) also showed that there is a high number of Ponzi investments nowadays. Phan et al. (2019) showed that most conversations across social media reflected the frequency in the existence of cryptocurrency scams. Similarly, the experiments by Phan et al. (2019) also revealed the existence of a significant number of Ponzi contracts. Generally, the studies depicted that Ponzi schemes have become very frequent in crypto.
c.
Recommendations
Trozze et al. (2022) recommended that there is a need for more research on the subject and the determination of effective measures for mitigation. On the same note, Phan et al. (2019) stated that further research is necessary to expand the understanding of crypto scams and ways to prevent them. He et al. (2022) also recommended the need for further studies to enable the detection and prevention of Ponzi schemes.
2.
What articles have differences in each section below?
a.
Methodology
Whereas He et al. (2022) and Galletta & Pinelli (2023) used experimental methodology, Phan et al. (2019) used observation, while Trozze et al. (2022) conducted their study through the use of systematic review. In addition, Galletta & Pinelli (2023) and He et al. (2022) relied on open-source, whereas Phan et al. (2019) used social media (Twitter) and Trozze et al. (2022) used publication databases.
b.
Findings
While the findings from all studies pointed to the rise in crypto scams, they featured variations in their focus points. While Trozze et al. (2022) focused on classifying the frequency of different forms of crypto fraud, including Ponzi schemes, pump-and-dump schemes, and market manipulation, Galletta and Pinelli (2023) and He et al. (2022) on the other hand only focused on Ponzi schemes and smart Ponzi contracts associated with Ethereum. The study by Phan et al. (2019) was also different from the other research in that their findings featured coverage of scams and fraud in general. Their research observed the entirety of conversations associated with cryptocurrency, scams, and fraud.
c.
Recommendations
The recommendations by He et al. (2022), Phan et al. (2019), and Trozze et al. (2022) mainly revolved around conducting more research to aid the understanding or detection, and prevention of crypto fraud. In contrast, Galletta & Pinelli (2023) looked at further developing a model for classifying and detecting different forms of cryptocurrency fraud.
References
Galletta, L., & Pinelli, F. (2023). Sharpening Ponzi Schemes Detection on Ethereum with Machine Learning.
arXiv preprint arXiv:2301.04872. https://arxiv.org/pdf/2301.04872
He, X., Yang, T., & Chen, L. (2022). CTRF: Ethereum-Based Ponzi Contract Identification.
Security and Communication Networks,
2022. https://doi.org/10.1155/2022/1554752
Phan, L., Li, S., & Mentzer, K. (2019). Blockchain technology and the current discussion on fraud.
Information Systems and Analytics Journal Articles. https://digitalcommons.bryant.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1027&context=cisjou\
Trozze, A., Kamps, J., Akartuna, E. A., Hetzel, F. J., Kleinberg, B., Davies, T., & Johnson, S. D. (2022). Cryptocurrencies and future financial crime.
Crime Science,
11, 1-35. 10.1186/s40163-021-00163-8
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Objective Summary: Ponzi Schemes in Relation to Cryptocurrency
Student Name
Department, Institution
Course Title
Instructor Name
Due Date
Objective Summary: Ponzi Schemes in relation to Cryptocurrency
Phan et al. (2019) researched the blockchain issue and what scams blockchain users endure when using such technology. The three authors are qualified to be in the study because they are members of Bryant University. The authors add their research to a prominent journal with several other commendable volumes. Since several individuals and companies globally are moving to a new cashless payment method of crypto, the researchers wanted to discover the fraudulent problems involved. The authors purposed to review the issue of cryptocurrency and how enterprises are adopting this new method of making payments. Phan et al. (2019) conducted this research in the year 2018 after having to collect Twitter data from November to December.
The research had no based geographical boundaries as the data in use came from various sources across the globe. Twitter can generate data from various locations worldwide as long as the authors use specific words that pertain to the research. The researchers used Twitter as a social media platform to gather data from tweets that mentioned the keywords of the study. The researchers used 7,901 tweets already in English, combining original tweets, retweets, and quoted ones or replies. The researchers wanted to contribute to the research surrounding blockchain technology and using bitcoin to make payments. The researchers were determining the kinds of scams that cryptocurrency users face when dealing with that means of payment. The researchers revealed tweets that had the words mentioned most times relating to the topic. The research showed that this payment technology is very secure, prompting users to look out for scams. The research revealed that fraud in this new payment method was rampant in first-world nations that deeply use it.
References
Phan, L., Li, S., & Mentzer, K. (2019). Blockchain technology and the current discussion on fraud. https://iacis.org/iis/2019/4_iis_2019_8-20
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Phase 1
3
a: Ponzi Schemes in relation to Cryptocurrency
Student’s name
Professor’s name
Course title
Institution
Date
Phase 13a: Ponzi Schemes in relation to Cryptocurrency
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #1: Cryptocurrencies and future financial crime
1.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
Data was collected through systematic review of various literature and research on cryptocurrency scams.
“This review followed the Preferred Reporting Items
for Systematic reviews and Meta-Analyses extension for Scoping Reviews (PRISMA-ScR) protocol.”
“To be considered for this
scoping review, published studies had to meet various eligibility criteria. First, we limited our review to publications written in English as we relied entirely on our reviewers’ language skills. The
academic literature portion of the scoping review exclusively focused on academic articles such as peer-reviewed journals and conference papers due to the study’s aim of mapping out current research activities. The
grey literature review included reports, publications, and alerts. By implication, the
review excludes publications such as blog posts, op-eds, presentations, newsletters, marketing materials, correspondence, and magazine or newspaper articles” (Trozze et al.,
2
022).
“The
review used Google Scholar (GS) to
identify academic studies for review and Google’s Search Engine to identify private and public sector publications potentially eligible for review.
2 One of the authors (AT) performed the final and most recent search on GS and Google’s Search Engine in November 2020” (Trozze et al., 2022).
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
The results indicated that there are 29 types of fraud associated with cryptocurrency.
“Academic publications most frequently referred to Ponzi schemes and (synonymous)
high yield investment programmes (HYIPs). These scam types were discussed in 44.4% of the included studies. Eighteen (28.6%) publications analysed
scams involving initial coin offerings (ICOs). Ten analyses (15.9%) covered
phishing scams and nine (14.3%) discussed unspecified types of fraud. Seven (11.1%) studies covered
pump-and-dump schemes and market manipulation. Six (9.5%) studies looked at
exchange scams and five (7.9%) at
scam wallet services. Four papers (4.8%) discussed each of the following types of fraud:
fraudulent cryptocoins, smart contract honeypots / attacks, and mining scams. Three publications (4.8%) discussed
mining malware and the same number addressed
smart Ponzi schemes. Two (3.2%) publications discussed
securities fraud and identity theft. Sixteen fraud categories were only mentioned in a single (1.6%) publication each. The second iteration of the search identified 17 new types of fraud from the literature” (Trozze et al., 2022).
“Altogether, 36 of the grey literature publications came from private sector companies. These publications identified
32 different types of cryptocurrency fraud, 14 of which were not identified in the academic literature” (Trozze et al., 2022).
“Most private sector studies (63.9%) referred to some
unspecified type of fraud or scam. Fourteen (38.9%) publications analysed
scams involving ICOs and 13 (36.1%) discussed
Ponzi schemes or HYIPs. Nine (25.0%) studies covered
phishing and seven (19.4%)
covered mining malware. Four studies (11.1%) looked at
SIM swapping, which did not appear in the academic literature, and which is defined in Appendix
3: Table
Table7.7
. Four studies (11%) also discussed giveaway scams. Three studies (8.3%) discussed
market manipulation, forex fraud, and/or exchange scams. Two studies (5.6%) looked at
impersonation scams, mining scams, pump-and-dumps, and/or securities fraud. Eighteen fraud categories were mentioned in a single publication each (2.8%)” (Trozze et al., 2022).
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #2: Sharpening Ponzi Schemes Detection on Ethereum with Machine Learning
1.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
The methodology entails application of experimental procedures.
“In this section, we build binary classifiers for detecting smart Ponzi contracts, and we perform an
experimental evaluation to study how the new features of Section IV impact classification and the quality of the obtained classifiers.”
2.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
The results showed that it is possible to assess and effectively classify cryptocurrency fraud from a credible investment.
“The two populations present a different behaviour for what concerns the input transactions (Tx_in): the plot of the cumulative distribution presents a very different shape. Typically,
smart Ponzi presents a small number of input transactions with few exceptions with many transactions. The same happens for features Investment_in/TX_in, Payment_out/TX_out where
smart Ponzi generally present larger values than the other class. We expect that these features provide the classifier with a relevant contribution to discriminate between the two classes” (Galletta & Pinelli, 2023).
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #3: Blockchain technology and the current discussion on fraud.
1.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
The data was collected through observation.
“To understand how fraud and blockchain topic are discussed on social media, a
twitter listener was developed using Apache Flume and approximately 2 million tweets were collected during November 8th and December 31, 2018 using “blockchain” as the
keyword. From this pool of tweets, 7,901 are tweets that include both “
fraud” and “
blockchain” in the tweet text and are written in English. Those tweets will be used in the analysis. About 41% (3,199) are original tweets, 51% of them are retweets (4,062) and the rest (8%, 649 tweets) are either quoted tweets or replies. Issues in Information Systems Volume 20, Issue 4, pp. x-x, 2019 13 This following section will first discuss top words and sentiment words in original tweets on blockchain fraud discussion, followed by a sentiment analysis about this topic. We also
identify top influencers in the topic by looking at the frequency of retweets and eigenvector centrality” (Phan et al., 2019).
2.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
The findings indicate that fraud in cryptocurrency has become commonplace and has influenced conversations.
“The findings of this research show that the most frequently mentioned words in tweets include
scam, tax, combat, fight,
bitcoin, crypto, payment, Asia, Japan, Germany, Thailand and banks. The top sentiment words are
scam, combat, fight, fraudulent, prison, swift,
frauds, hacked, prevent, and guilty” (Phan et al., 2019).
“It can be seen that people are
more aware and concerned about the scams and barely mentioned other security attacks such as the 51% attack and hard fork. In addition, the
frequency and severity of scams
are much greater than other issues because blockchain is structured in a very secure way, making other attacks more difficult to occur” (Phan et al., 2019).
W(5)H(1): New Research Article #4: CTRF: Ethereum-Based Ponzi Contract Identification
1.
How was data collected (methodology)? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the methodology and HIGHLIGHT the indicator words that specifically show you the methodology
:
Data was collected through conducting an experiment.
“In our
experiments, we eliminated two non-Ponzi contract addresses that were not successfullydeployed and found two addresses with exactly opposite labels to other address sets” (He et all., 2022).
“
Datasets. To compare the validity of the datasets and features, we did
experiments on four main datasets” (He et all., 2022).
“We
conducted independent experiments on these four datasets: first cross-validating to find the best
experimental parameters, then using 70% of the dataset for training and 30% for testing, and finally
conducting 20 experiments to calculate the average results” (He et all., 2022).
2.
What were the findings? Cut and paste the paragraph below that describes the findings and HIGHLIGHT the sentences that specifically show you the summary of findings:
Ponzi schemes are evident in matters to do with cryptocurrency.
“We observed a
large number of Ponzi contracts and found that when most of them receive a transfer from an external account, they will determine whether the amount of the transfer is less than the minimum investment threshold set by the contract” (He et all., 2022).
Parameters and Database used
References
Galletta, L., & Pinelli, F. (2023). Sharpening Ponzi Schemes Detection on Ethereum with Machine Learning.
arXiv preprint arXiv:2301.04872. https://arxiv.org/pdf/2301.04872
He, X., Yang, T., & Chen, L. (2022). CTRF: Ethereum-Based Ponzi Contract Identification.
Security and Communication Networks,
2022. https://doi.org/10.1155/2022/1554752
Phan, L., Li, S., & Mentzer, K. (2019). Blockchain technology and the current discussion on fraud. https://digitalcommons.bryant.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1027&context=cisjou\
Trozze, A., Kamps, J., Akartuna, E. A., Hetzel, F. J., Kleinberg, B., Davies, T., & Johnson, S. D. (2022). Cryptocurrencies and future financial crime.
Crime Science,
11, 1-35. 10.1186/s40163-021-00163-8
W E L C O M E B A C K
PA R T I : T H E L I T E R AT U R E R E V I E W
PA R T I I : L E V E L H E A D I N G S
PA R T I I I : W O R K S H O P F O R H W !
Part I: The Literature Review
The Basic Structure of the RESEARCH PAPER
Which parts have you done?
Which parts have you done?
What comes NEXT?
What comes NEXT?
What IS a Literature Review???
Think about this…
Literature
Review
what could it be?
What IS a Literature Review???
Usually, PART of a research paper
An objective summary of what the
research literature says about your
topic or question.
A demonstration of your familiarity
with pertinent work in the field.
A research history, upon which later
research can be built.
What IS a Literature Review???
Usually, PART of a research paper
Contains several objective
summaries of what the research
literature says about your topic or
question.
A demonstration of your familiarity
with pertinent work in the field.
A research history, upon which later
research can be built.
What IS a Literature Review???
Usually, PART of a research paper
Contains several objective summaries
of what the research literature says
about your topic or question.
A demonstration of your familiarity
with pertinent work in the field.
A research history, upon which later
research can be built.
What IS a Literature Review???
Usually, PART of a research paper
An objective summary of what the
research literature says about your
topic or question.
A demonstration of your familiarity
with pertinent work in the field.
A research history, upon which later
research can be built.
Let’s look at two samples:
1. Student sample
2. Doctoral sample
First, the Student sample on p. 49 to 51in
your manuals.
Treasure hunt!
See if you can find two compare/contrast
transition phrases at the beginnings of two
of the paragraphs on page 50
Now, a Doctoral sample
In this week’s folder:
”Dr. Bouteneff Dissertation-see chapter 2”
note: it’s in a slightly different style (APA 5), and
the introductory paragraph is not written in the
way you will write yours, but still worth looking at!
(When will you get YOUR doctorate??)
A literature review consists of 3 parts
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
See page 42 in your resource manuals
A literature review consists of 3 parts
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
A literature review consists of 3 parts
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
A literature review consists of 3 parts
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
What part of the
literature review
have you started on?
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
Without even realizing it!!
What part of the
literature review
have you started on?
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
What part of the
literature review
have you started on?
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature (Wait! What?? How??)
3. Analysis of Literature
Your
GRADED and REVISED
Objective Summary
will be copied
right into the
Review of Literature
(with your three more,
newly written
objective summaries)
BUT…
In what order will you
present the research?
I have a task to help you with
this!
To Blackboard! First I will show you your task and then expand
upon its importance to your paper.
To make your literature review “flow,” you
will need to see what is the same and what is
different among them: (Remember the
treasure hunt? )
• like
• similar to
• also
• in the same way
• at the same time
• unlike
• in contrast
• contrasted with
• on the contrary
• while…
compare contrastand
Part II: Level Headings
Now, organize them according to patterns
you found, and use appropriate level
headings to guide your reader
Level I header
Your written work goes here in paragraph
format only.
Level II Header (sub-level of H1)
Your written work goes here in paragraph
format only.
Level III Header (sub-level of H2)
Your written work goes here in paragraph
format only.
Let’s take a look at a fellow
student’s research paper
Week 6 folder
Just a Note about your Review of Literature!
Typically, each level heading should include at least
three research articles, but, as this is a foundations
course, you will only provide a total of four research
articles for your Literature Review and you need a
minimum of 2 Level II headers
Part III: Workshop!
Ready, Set, GO!
1. Pull up the p. 13a in your Final ‘Mission’ Packet. Here, you have
your W(5) H(1) notes for EACH research article.
IF you do not have ALL FOUR research articles, find them now.
RESUBMIT 13a. Phase I and complete Phase II in your packet before
moving onto #2.
2. Open and complete p. 16a in your Final ‘Mission’ Packet which
will help you compare and contrast your research articles to
decide upon the order you will present them in your Review of
Literature.
3. CUT and PASTE p. 16a it into a new Word document to be
submitted to Blackboard for HW.
Congratulations! You just completed the
necessary work to help you determine the
order of articles for your Review of Literature!
1. Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
2. Review of Literature
3. Analysis of Literature
Welcome!
This is an exciting day!
You will be completing the literature review
section of your research paper!
Congratulations! You have what you need for
part 2 of the literature review!
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
Review of Literature
Analysis of Literature
Now, let’s write Part 1!
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
Review of Literature
Analysis of Literature
Part 1: Introduction paragraph
(this will be for workshop, so pay attention!)
Part 1: introduction paragraph
Method in 6 Steps…
STEP 1:
Opening
sentence: isolate
your research
problem, with
citation
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 1:
Opening
sentence: isolate
your research
problem, with
citation
Higher infant weight gain is a known
risk factor for obesity later on in life
(Azad et al., 2018).
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 2:
Explain why it is
necessary to
solve this
problem
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 2:
Explain why it is
necessary to
solve this
problem
With the obesity epidemic
continuously affecting the
population, examining the risk
factors of obesity is essential to
protecting public health.
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 3:
Ensure your reader
that you have only
included research
articles in the
literature review
and identify the
main theme
among them
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 3:
Ensure your reader
that you have only
included research
articles in the
literature review
and identify the
main theme
among them
The literature review included only
research articles and literature
regarding the factors that influence
high infant weight gain.
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 4:
If you notice
multiple factors,
you should list
them
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 4:
If you notice
multiple factors,
you should list
them
Factors such as maternal behaviors,
feeding methods, and mode of
feedings were reviewed.
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 5:
Include the
names of the
databases you
used to conduct
your research
from the Monroe
College Library
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 5:
Include the
names of the
databases you
used to conduct
your research
from the Monroe
College Library
The databases that were used to
conduct the literature review
included ProQuest and EBSCO Host
from the Monroe College Library.
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 6:
Lastly, list any
search
words/terms you
used in order to
find your
research articles
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
STEP 6:
Lastly, list any
search
words/terms you
used in order to
find your
research articles
Search terms were used to obtain
relevant literature, such as: infant
weight gain, infant overweight,
infant feeding, breastfeeding and
weight gain, and formula feeding
and weight gain.
SAMPLE
Part 1: introduction paragraph
Now put it together:
Higher infant weight gain is a known risk factor for obesity later on in life (Azad et al.,
2018). With the obesity epidemic continuously affecting the population, examining the risk
factors of obesity is essential to protecting public health. The literature review included only
research articles and literature regarding the factors that influence high infant weight gain.
Factors such as maternal behaviors, feeding methods, and mode of feedings were reviewed.
The databases that were used to conduct the literature review included ProQuest and EBSCO
Host from the Monroe College Library. Search terms were used to obtain relevant literature,
such as: infant weight gain, infant overweight, infant feeding, breastfeeding and weight gain,
and formula feeding and weight gain.
You have these DETAILED
instructions on that
on p. 9 of your Final ‘Mission’
Packet!
Ready, Set, GO! Use pp. 9-10
as a sample
Workshop your Introduction to the Literature review!
1. Flip to the activity on p. 10a of the Final ‘Mission’
Packet
2. fill it out
3. put the pieces together to draft YOUR
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
(now! before going to the next slide!)
Congratulations! you are done with parts
1 AND 2 of the literature review!
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
Review of Literature
Analysis of Literature
Now, let’s write Part 3!
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
Review of Literature
Analysis of Literature
Please pull up your assignment on p. 16a of YOUR
Final ‘Mission’ Packet where you compared and
contrasted your articles (last week)
Please make that into an elegant paragraph, now. See
sample on p. 17
Congratulations! you are done with parts
1 AND 2 AND 3 of the literature review!
Introduction Paragraph for the Literature Review
Review of Literature
Analysis of Literature
Step Description of Tasks P #
1 Format your APA-7-Compliant Title page. p. 1
2 Use a Level 1 Heading for “Literature Review” and a Level 2 Heading to
write your “Introduction to the Literature Review”
p. 10a
Sample on p. 10
3 Evaluate your analysis to decide upon the ORDER in which you will
present research.
p. 16a
4 Use Level 3 Headings for any potential categories articles that fall under
the Level 2 Heading of “Review of Literature” (see sample). Use your
notes p. 13a to write your next three objective summaries and fit in your
graded objective summary into your decided order.
p. 13a
Sample on p. 14
5 Use a Level 2 Heading for “Analysis of Literature” and write the last
paragraph of your Literature Review.
p. 16a
Sample on p. 17
6 Create and format your APA-7-Compliant References page including ANY
source cited in your document.
7 Complete Checklist p. 17a
8 Submit your Draft of the Literature Review and the checklist Submission
Now …
Be proud! You’ve met a major Milestone in the research
paper process!